I would probably go with something that’s not likely to be mistranslated. That is, something simpler. mei hostes pessimi sum.
Or perhaps something less literal: omnium virorum hostes pessimi mei sum. Of all men, I am the worst enemy of myself.
I don’t think it’s necessary to include an intensive pronoun, as meus -a -um can be translated as my own.
I would also note that I would translate “Ego Inimicus Pessimus Mihi” literally as: I am the worst, hostile/unsuitable to/for me/myself.
Or something along those lines assuming you translate with a verb which isn’t present in that fragment.
Vastor,
Not sure why you use hostes pessimi. These are plurals.
TheProphet,
I think ‘inimicus’ is the best adjective to use. A hostis is more of an enemy of the state, whereas an inimicus is a personal enemy. This seems more appropriate here. Also, by using the superlative inimicissimus one is able to shorten the phrase to something more succinct, leaving out the superfluous pessimus.
I also think that an intensive pronoun is useful, since that’s what Latin would use. Latin frequently uses such words where English feels it unnecessary.
mihimet is nice, and I would in fact leave out the ipse if you used mihimet.
mihimet sum inimicissimus.
Mihi sum ipse inimicissimus.
I will shortly consult the ultimate Latin brain and provide a ‘definitive’ answer later.
“Nimiùm meae propriae personae [sum] infensus.”
[Literally in English // sensu proprio anglicè] "Excessively to my own person dangerous " or "To my own person too great an enemy ".
In my dictionary it states that the plural of hostis means the enemy, and the singular means enemy of the state. This is why I used the plural.
The problem I have with inimicus is that it represents feeling of unfriendlyness/hostility/harmfulness directed at a given object, which in your example is mihi, or myself translating as a reflexive pronoun. While it is grammatically correct, I feel that it almost directs hatred towards oneself (self-loathing). But that’s just my opinion. And hostis only means enemy of the state when used in the singular, and as you can see I specifically used the plural which changes the meaning to The Enemy. However, I would appreciate further discussion as I use the plural of hostis quite often to mean The Enemy. Thanks.
I don’t believe brevity in latin equates to conciseness when the semantics are deficient. Saying that, I don’t see how my translation is any more verbose than yours. But I would be happy for you to explain further, because I’m just a beginner in latin myself.
To me I felt that ipse was superfluous, because mihi is usually reflexive and therefore already expresses the idea of myself emphatically; this in addition to you putting it first in the sentence.
Agreed, that looks like a better choice instead of mihi + ipse.
I can try, although you have to bear in mind that each person can translate things slightly differently. These are my literal translations, not vernacular/idiomatic english translations. Although I do place the verb first for uniformity.
Ego Inimicus Pessimus Mihi [sum]. the worst, most hostile to myself.Mihimet ipse[intensive pronoun is modifer of implied subject?] sum inimicissimus. I am myself most hostile/harmful to my own [self].
Mihi sum ipse[intensive pronoun is modifer of implied subject?] inimicissimus. I am myself most hostile/harmful to me/myself.
Mei hostes pessimi sum I am my own worst enemy.
Omnium virorum hostes pessimi mei[reflexive] sum. Of all men, I am the worst enemy of myself.
Certainly “hostis” should be singular for “an enemy”. See L&S and OLD. Secundum L&S et OLD dictionaria, certè “hostis” singulariter inimicus significat vel denotat.
L&S notes no difference between the singular and plural as far as I can see. But most other dictionaries carefully note the difference in meaning. That is the singular means foreigner, stranger, enemy of the state. I specially recall reading the phrase brutus hostis, which means that brutus was an enemy of the state (as we know). The plural is in fact often used to mean the singular. So for these reasons I uphold my decision to choose the plural.
Well, L&S and OLD and Cassell’s are the best. Can you say which dictionaries in particular, vastor? Age, optima sunt OLD et illa de L&S et Cassell. Tuâ veniâ, vastor, quae dictionaria propria?
hi vastor, it would help if you could give a classical e.g. of HOSTES (plural) used with a singular verb (in your sentence, SVM) to refer to a single person.
as a side-point, there are in fact some classical self-enmity refs., e.g.:
ovid tristia 2.82 “VIX TVNC IPSE MIHI NON INIMICVS ERAM”
cicero de finibus 5.10.28 “SI QVIS SIBI IPSI INIMICVS EST”
ad herennium 4.14 “VT IPSE SIBI REPERIRETVR INIMICVS”
copying the above e.g.s, you could construct a similar phrase:
(a) reflexive idea: all above e.g.s use a form of IPSE and the reflexive, so copy, i.e. IPSE MIHI. as between IPSE agreeing with the subject (as in the 1st and 3rd e.g.s above) and IPSI agreeing with the reflexive (as in the 2nd e.g. above), the former is more common: see woodcock’s syntax pg 25, section 37(i): http://books.google.fr/books?id=WmT6mS5v4dAC&pg=PA25#v=onepage&q=&f=false
(b) worst enemy idea: all above e.g.s use INIMICVS, however this is not “worst” enemy. there are some classical e.g.s of ACERRIMVS used with ADVERSARIVS or INIMICVS in this sense:
cicero pro quinctio 37.4 “QVIS HVIC REI TESTIS EST? IDEM QVI ACERRIMVS ADVERSARIVS”
cicero ad atticum 10.8.8.3 “QVI QVIDEM SIBI EST ADVERSARIVS VNVS ACERRIMVS”
ad herennium 2.28 “INIMICVM ENIM ACERRIMVM DE MEDIO TOLLERE VOLEBAT”,
I second this request for a citation. The assertion appears dubious to me.
Yes, though there appears to be a slight difference in sense if we use the superlative.
mihi sum ipse inimicissimus “I myself am the most hostile (of all people) towards myself.” mihi ipsi sum inimicissimus “I am the most hostile towards myself alone (less so towards others).”
The first definitely aligns better with the intent of the original English. Good citations, anyway.
But in contemporary English “best friend” and “worst enemy” are neutral terms in regard to the concept of goodness or badness/wickedness as a quality. All they suggest is a friend or enemy who is considered the greatest or most prominent among all the others. This is why the superlative form seemed to me the best way to translate the concept while still maintaining the neutral tone. Acerrimus inimicus/adversarius “bitterest foe”, on the other hand, is a good deal more vivid and emotionally-charged description. As a genuine, legitimate Roman expression which is nearly equivalent to the OP’s request, however, I would recommend it regardless.
With reperior the phrase would suggest that there was a revelation of some kind, viz. that something happened to make him realize he was his own worst enemy: “I am found/discover myself to be my own worst enemy.”
Hi Everyone,
Vastor, you are generally correct in your idea of hostis apearing in the singular and plural. However, there really is no difference in meaning, a least not as you are suggesting. Hostis as a singular may refer to one specific person or to a whole army. As a plural it seems more likely to refer to the whole army. Latin will use the two interchangeably, as in fact will English. In any case, it certainly doesn’t make sense to use it in apposition with a singular noun or pronoun, such as ego, or the verb sum.
In addition, hostis is really referring to a political or battlefield enemy. Catiline is referred to as a hostis, as are the Gauls or Hannibal etc. A hostis is an enemy of Rome. An inimicus (not friend: in-amicus) is an adjective, yes, but it is used as a substantive to refer to a personal enemy. Caesar regarded Cato as an inimicus, but he would never have called him a hostis, at least not until civil war had broken out. Likewise, Cicero might have called Clodius an inimicus, but he reserved hostis for Catiline, someone who threatened the state itself.
Lastly, I suggested ipse simply because it is a Latin mode of speaking. Whether or not we might say I myself am my own worst enemy is immaterial. A Roman probably would. Even with the mihi, Latin will often add intensive pronouns.
Good to see so many ideas and suggestions.
I like the acerrimus idea as well.