Hi everyone,
I’m currently translating this Christmas carol, and this is what I have so far. My main goal is for it to make sense and to fit the traditional tune:
ὧ μῑκρόν ἄστυ βηθλεεμ
ὡς κείσαι ἥσυχως
ἐν ᾧ σὺ εὕδεες βαθύ
ἡ νύξ παρέρχεται
Any recommendations/fixes?