New member request

I am a Wikipedian researching 19th century life and joined because I am very interested gain familiarity with the Greek language, which is often used in the original when quoted by classical scholars of the era.

Came across two quotes (so far) in Greek, in a book which I am proofreading on the English Wikisource (a sister project of Wikipedia). I have doubts about the accuracy of the proofreading. Could anyone please help to check and provide here the corrections.

One quote appears on this page:
https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Page:The_Conquest_of_Mexico_Volume_1.djvu/470

and the second can be found on this page:
https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Page:The_Conquest_of_Mexico_Volume_1.djvu/484