It’s not wrong of course, but to say nunc instead of hoc tempore and tunc instead of illo tempore is more natural.
Thanks again for your correction, my friend. I will keep that in mind for the future.
Gratias quoque tibi ago propter tuam correctionem, mi amice. Tenebo in mente mea ad usum futurum,
How about adding also the Greek? 
Great idea! After I finish transcribing the Latin, I’ll attempt adding the Greek. My friend, could I conscript you to do the audio ? It is not a very long text at all.
O bonam ideam! Cum Latinum transcripsero, tunc Graecum adiungere conar. Potesne, mi amice conscribi ut sermonem facias? ? Longus textus non est.
Placet.