A message from Nike, the sportsman's Muse

Here’s a couple of lines of iambic trimeter that should be topical in a few weeks time.
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ὀλυμπιαζε ἡσυχως τους γνωριμους
ἀσπαζομαι και διαφεροιτε συν θεῳ

Lol, if there are any Olympic games to go to… the Greeks aren’t doing to well with the building scedule :wink: .
I can’t think of anything to improve right now…

So there’s the next challenge then!
A distich from the Muse assuring us that all is in hand and her construction team are up to it :smiley:

Happy versifying,
Paul McK

Not iambic trimeter though:

παντα εστιν κοσμιος
και οὕτως μη ἀλγε. :wink:

Hi, here’s my lines on the topic: asking athena not to listen to the slander about her people and the Olympic stadium they’re making (slowly). The lines are in aeolic (except for a few words where i couldn’t find an aeolic word), in Sappho’s famous metre. I’ll do them in spionic and betacode, since i still don’t have spionic back :frowning:

[size=150]ὦ ’Αθανάα", φιλότατά σ’ ἄμμιν,
λίσσομαί σε, μή σ’ ἄϊε ψόγοιο,
ἄλλ’ ’Ολύμπιον δρόμον εὖ ἄερρε
Κεκροπίας τε.[/size]

w)= ‘Aqana/a+, filo/tata/ s’ a)/mmin,
li/ssomai/ se, mh/ s’ a)/i+e yo/goio,
a)/ll’ 'Olu/mpion dro/mon eu)= a)/erre
Kekropi/aj te.

Oh Athena, most dear to us,
I beg you, do not listen to the slander,
But rather exalt the Olympian stadium
and the people of Athens.

the metre goes (dash = long, full stop = short, x = can be either)

  • . - x - . . - . - x
  • . - x - . . - . - x
  • . - x - . . - . - x
  • . . - x

and the last “line” runs on in the same breath from the 3rd line… i think i’ve read that…

There must be room for improvement!

Paul McK

We quietly welcome friends(those familiar) to Olympus
and may you carry over with the Gods.

Yeah.. I’ve been too careless about the number. :blush: