Preparation for passage based crosswords

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Re: Preparation for passage based crosswords

Post by Aetos » Tue Jul 10, 2018 1:14 pm

ὦ φίλε ἑκηβόλε, σοὶ ἔχω χάριν τοῦ περὶ ἐμέθεν προσφιλὴν μνείαν ποιεῖσθαι. ἀναγιγνώσκων τὴν Ιλιάδα, εὑρῆκα τὸν γε λόγον·
"ἦ πολὺ λώϊόν ἐστι κατὰ στρατὸν εὐρὺν Ἀχαιῶν
δῶρ' ἀποαιρεῖσθαι..."

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Re: Preparation for passage based crosswords

Post by ἑκηβόλος » Wed Jul 11, 2018 8:32 am

bedwere wrote:
ἑκηβόλος wrote:λαθοῦσα ἑαυτῆς - ἀμελήσασα.
ἀμελήσα --> ἀμελήσασα
This is wrong. I naïvely grouped the words wrongly there: λαθοῦσα ἑαυτῆς ἥψατο πολλάκις, I read it as that she had mistakenly or carelessly touched Daphnis, rather than deliberately touched herself.
λανθάνει - ἐν κρύπτῳ.
ἑαυτῆς ἥψατο - ἔψαυσα τοῦ ἑαυτῆς δέρματος.
Longus 1.13.3 wrote:Καὶ ῾τότε γὰρ ἐπὶ δυσμαῖς ἦν ὁ ἥλιος᾿ ἀπήλασαν τὰς ἀγέλας οἴκαδε, καὶ ἐπεπόνθει Χλόη περιττὸν οὐδέν, ὅτι μὴ Δάφνιν ἐπεθύμει λουόμενον ἰδέσθαι πάλιν.
ἐπὶ δυσμαῖς - ἐν τῷ τόπῳ ὅπου δύνει ὁ ἥλιος.
ἀπελαύνει - ἀποβάλλει.
ἀγέλη - ὁμὰς τῶν τραγῶν ἢ τῶν ὀΐων.
περισσός - ?
οἴκαδε - πρὸς τὴν οἰκίαν.
ἐπιθυμεῖ - ἐθέλει.
ἰδέσθαι - βλέπειν.
πάλιν - ὡς πρότερον, ὡς πρόσθεν.

Rather a tortured syntactic construction there.
Thou wast not born for death, immortal Bird!
No hungry generations tread thee down;
The voice I hear this passing night was heard
In ancient days by emperor and clown:
(Keats, Ode to a nightingale, 1819).

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Re: Preparation for passage based crosswords

Post by Markos » Wed Jul 11, 2018 10:19 pm

ἑκηβόλος wrote:
Longus 1.13.3 wrote:Καὶ ῾τότε γὰρ ἐπὶ δυσμαῖς ἦν ὁ ἥλιος᾿ ἀπήλασαν τὰς ἀγέλας οἴκαδε, καὶ ἐπεπόνθει Χλόη περιττὸν οὐδέν, ὅτι μὴ Δάφνιν ἐπεθύμει λουόμενον ἰδέσθαι πάλιν.
περισσός - ?
πλεῖον ἢ...
ἑκηβόλος wrote:Στέφανος ὁ λεγόμενος ἑκηβόλος τῷ Μάρκῳ τῷ ἐπικαλουμένῳ φωσφόρῳ πλεῖστα χάρειν. πρὸ πάντων εὔχομαι σὲ ὑγιαίνειν.
εὐχαριστῷ σοι. ὑγιαίνω δὴ καὶ ὑγιαίνει ὁ οἶκός μου. τὴν δὲ παράφρασίν σου σφόδρα φιλῶ.
οὐ μανθάνω γράφειν, ἀλλὰ γράφω τοῦ μαθεῖν.

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