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I am not at a level to really comment on the translation but it seems very good from what I see! Thanks for posting it.
I do have one question: In the last sentence, you do not seem to repeat "victory" as Churchill spoke it. Was there a reason you do not repeat it in a similar fashion? Was it just a personal choice or is there a reason you can't be that repetitive in Latin?
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