Yes, lol, I'm just used my teacher telling me to try and leave each word in the position it's in in Greek
. In German that works out a little better than in English...
Actually my teacher would have demanded something like this: These things about the army the messenger from his brother said to Cyrus before the battle.
It seems he's right again, though. I should have translated it like he always wants me to, sounds better than what I did at first, lol.