<br /><br /><br />What book is this which has been sent to us by our friends with whom we were walking?<br /><br />
Qui liber est hic qui nobis a amicis quibuscum ambulabamus missus est?<br /><br />
This is correct, but "ab" can only be shortened to "a" before a consonant.<br /><br />The man whom you saw at that time is the sailor to whom I gave those gifts.<br /><br />
Vir quem tunc vidisti est nauta cui donas illas dedi.<br /><br />
Correct, although I believe the word is "donum" so the plural accusative would be "dona" (unless this an alternative).<br /><br />For five years he hoped that he would complete this, his own work, but now he hates it.<br /><br />
Quinque annos sperabat illud opus suum conficeret sed nunc id odit. <br /><br />
Good, as far as I can tell.<br /><br />We said that we would move five feet to the right in order that we might see your king with his queen and their sons.<br /><br />
Diximus nos quinqe pedes ad dextram moturi esse ut regem vestrum cum regina et filiis videramus. <br /><br />
I think it would be "moturos" instead of "moturi" since "nos" is the direct object of "diximus". "Videramus" should be "videremus" because it is just the infinitive with a present active ending on it.<br /><br />Those wretched people not only hate themselves, but they also say that we hate them.<br /><br />
Non solum illi miseri se oderunt sed etiam nos eos odisse dicerunt.<br /><br />
Right on
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flebile nescio quid queritur lyra, flebile lingua murmurat exanimis, respondent flebile ripae