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Is this a correct translation?

Postby chica » Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:01 pm

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Postby Twpsyn » Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:21 pm

Typos:

Aeneaus


*Aeneas

with Euryalos


*Euryalus

to the Rutulians camp


*Rutulians'

sribet


*scribet

Here are some corrections for a strict literal translation.

Duces Troianorum: leaders of the Trojans
iuvenes: youths (typo, probably)
ad hos: to these men
ex illis: could refer to either the camp or the men. There's no noun in the Latin, so if you need strict literalness 'camp' shouldn't be there; on the other hand, if you take illis as masculine plural (more likely to my mind), it's standard procedure to translate it as 'those men'.
somnus istos habet: sleep has the men (can't be the camp, which is neuter)
in castra Rutulorum: into the camp of the Rutulians
dux Rutulorum: leader of the Rutulians
scribet, dabit: will write, will give
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Postby Interaxus » Tue Jul 22, 2008 1:48 am

Necat Volcentem, sed iste antea Euryalum necat.
He kills Volcens, but he kills Euryalus before that.


Which ‘he’ kills Euryalus? Surely not Nisus. Disambiguate! (‘iste’ = ‘that one’ = Volcens)

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Postby Essorant » Tue Jul 22, 2008 2:15 am

Other than some of the points mentioned above, (especially the "iste"), there are no major issues. The translation shows you understand well what you are reading. Keep up the good work.<pre></pre>
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