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Help Translating a Phrase

Postby jgcooper » Sat Jul 12, 2008 8:44 am

Hi,

there's a certain phrase i'd like to translate into latin, but my skills turned out not be so good, i've only managed to figured out a few scattered words, which might even be wrong, here's how the phrase goes:

"my ideals are my spear, my convictions are my shield"

i cant think of a plural for "idealis", but turned 'convictions' into "convictiones". for 'shield' i used 'scutum', though for 'spear' i'm not sure which word to use.
what i got to was:

"idealis(pl) mei sunt mea lancea, convictiones scutum"

which is probably awful.

thanks already!
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Postby Kasper » Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:04 am

“Cum ego verbo utar,” Humpty Dumpty dixit voce contempta, “indicat illud quod optem – nec plus nec minus.”
“Est tamen rogatio” dixit Alice, “an efficere verba tot res indicare possis.”
“Rogatio est, “Humpty Dumpty responsit, “quae fiat magister – id cunctum est.”
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Postby jgcooper » Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:29 am

gratias tibi ago

ideals, is meant as something which is aimed for, in some way.
and convictions, as to what to stick to.
i think that works.
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Re: Help Translating a Phrase

Postby ptolemyauletes » Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:44 pm

How about something like this? Latin will tend to avoid abstractions, so a verb like credo along with an ablative adverbial phrase to denote the ideals and convictions. There is alos some balance and contrast in this phrase.

in rebus bonis hastae, scuto in extremis credo.
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