GlottalGreekGeek wrote:It took several days to compose this.
Even now I wonder if there is a metrical problem in the last hemiepe. I know hiatus is not allowed, but I am relying on the rule in Pharr 1173 to make it scan. Since I am trying to imitate an earlier rather than later poet, is this allowed?
GlottalGreekGeek wrote:[face=SPIonic]gh=j d / a0palh=j propa/roiqe pro\ d / ou0rano/qen poliou= te/
dendrw=n me\n korufa\j mikrh\ e)ou=sa q / o(rw=
Ianus wrote:Two things:
1. Wow, great work! I hope someday, I'll be able to write stuff like that (like Martial, one of my heroes!)
Which brings me to 2> What kind of meter is used here- it seems kinda formless to me.
PS: Sorry for turning your poetry into *lesson*
Ludo wrote:I think I'm having a problem viewing the poem. Do I need a special font perhaps? It comes out looking like the quote above.
Thanks and good luck with your poetry!
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