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Could someone please help me with a translation?

Postby Kweasi » Fri Apr 09, 2004 6:35 am

I've been trying, in vain, to get this phase translated from english to latin; could someone please help me?

the phase is:
"Life is a Fight".

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Postby benissimus » Fri Apr 09, 2004 7:06 am

I suppose the simplest choice would be something like pugna est vita.
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Postby whiteoctave » Fri Apr 09, 2004 1:02 pm

Can't find fault with Benissimus' translation; perhaps replacing "certamen" for "pugna" might highlight more of the struggling aspect, if that's what you're looking for; it may also be niceto have an infinitive:
certamen est vivere - "to live is a struggle".
who knows?

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Postby Kweasi » Sat Apr 10, 2004 10:16 pm

The phase is to be used for a Tatoo; so it's rather crucial that the translation be correct- anything less would prove rather embarrasing!

The idea is to convey that living is a struggle/fight.

Also, I was told that a verb along the lines of "battera" would provide the right meaning; although this could be completely off base.

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Postby benissimus » Sun Apr 11, 2004 5:31 am

I change my mind, the infinitive vivere would be a very good choice here. Certamen may be the word you are looking for, it suggests a struggle and competition. Pugna is quite literally a fight or battle. You definitely shouldn't go with battera, since it is not a Classical Latin word. Whatever of these you choose, it will be accurate, we just want it to be as apt as possible.
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Postby Kweasi » Sun Apr 11, 2004 8:55 pm

"Certamen est vivere", as WhiteOctave suggested does have a nicer rythem when spoken- could anyone else verify that this is the correct translation (just as a matter of certainty).

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Postby benissimus » Mon Apr 12, 2004 2:32 am

Just about anything whiteoctave says about Latin is correct ;) This sentence is of such a grammatically simple nature that it is easy to see that there is no flaw in it.
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