I'd like to compose a birth blessing for my daughter.
I'm attending a parents' lesson these weekends and on this coming Saturday I'm supposed to come with one, with which to practice the blessing.
It's supposed to be written in Korean, but I'd like to make a greek version(OR translation), too.
What I'm having in mind is like this.(Okay you laugh at it, but please help me.)
Know that your life began with the stars over the sky,
And that your birth is not a mere coincidence,
And that the stars live in you, with the everlasting light,
And that we live in you forever, with our love.
This is my really really crude attempt.
gnw/qi o(ti kai\ bi/oj sou\ ei)sh=lqe meta ta\ a1stra,
kai\ sou\ ge/nna ou2x e)k sunteu/cidi,
kai ta a)/stra e)/n soi bi/ousi, meta tou\ fw/toj ai)w/niou,
kai\ a)ei/ e)/n soi bio/omen, a)/gape'mwn te.