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bedwere wrote:Two wrong endings you'd probably find yourself, if you read it again tomorrow.
Instead of cum his, I'd write his hortationibus or something like that.
I'd write ex

I'd put nonnullos e cas.. egressos
Ah, sloppy of me! I agree with his hortationibus (admonitus as I wrote is even straight out grammatically wrong; I think I mixed up admoneo with hortor) or just solve it the way the answer key suggests. And the change in word order you suggested seems good. I also used a sub-clause in two instances where the answer key used participles instead... but my solutions certainly can't be incorrect.

Answer key to exercise 31:
1. Illi castra munientes ab hostibus oppugnati sunt (or Hostes eos castra munientes adorti sunt).
2. Castra, nonnullis iam egressis, ab hostibus oppugnata sunt.
3. Hostes nonnullos e castris egressos agressi sunt.
4. Caesare in castra ingresso milites hostium impetus fortius sustinebant.
5. Suos ita (in hunc modum) hortatus discessit.
6. Urbe prodita abierunt.
7. Exercitu in urbem reducto obsides imperavit (poposcit).
8. Regibus expulsis Romani consules habebant.
9. Aegris in castris relictis hostem secuti sunt.
10. Hostem sequens occisus est.

Exercise 32
The enemy being now defeated, the general led his men back to the camp, which had been fortified by a rampart. The lieutenant having been left in the camp, had not heard about the battle. When he saw the army at a distance, he went to the top of the rampart to await them. As they approached, he went out and asked them about the fight. But they were so tired that they would tell him nothing, but threw away teyr arms and went to their tents.

Hostibus iam victis dux suos in castra vallo munita reduxit. Legatus in castris relictus de proelio non cognovit. Exercito procul viso ad vallum summum ascendit, ut expectat. Egressus appropinquantes de proelio interrogavit. Tam autem defessi erant ut ei nihil dicere vellent, sed armis abiectis ad tabernacula se conferrent.

Not sure if using autem in the last sentence is correct, but I didn't wanna write sed ..., sed because it looks ugly. Thanks in advance for any input! :)

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Banana tree wrote:
Exercise 32
The enemy being now defeated, the general led his men back to the camp, which had been fortified by a rampart. The lieutenant having been left in the camp, had not heard about the battle. When he saw the army at a distance, he went to the top of the rampart to await them. As they approached, he went out and asked them about the fight. But they were so tired that they would tell him nothing, but threw away teyr arms and went to their tents.

Hostibus iam victis dux suos in castra vallo munita reduxit. Legatus in castris relictus de proelio non cognovit. Exercito procul viso ad vallum summum ascendit, ut expectat. Egressus appropinquantes de proelio interrogavit. Tam autem defessi erant ut ei nihil dicere vellent, sed armis abiectis ad tabernacula se conferrent.

Not sure if using autem in the last sentence is correct, but I didn't wanna write sed ..., sed because it looks ugly. Thanks in advance for any input! :)
ad summum vallum
vellent --> possent?
conferrent why subjunctive?

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Banana tree wrote:
Exercise 32
The enemy being now defeated, the general led his men back to the camp, which had been fortified by a rampart. The lieutenant having been left in the camp, had not heard about the battle. When he saw the army at a distance, he went to the top of the rampart to await them. As they approached, he went out and asked them about the fight. But they were so tired that they would tell him nothing, but threw away teyr arms and went to their tents.

Hostibus iam victis dux suos in castra vallo munita reduxit. Legatus in castris relictus de proelio non cognovit. Exercito procul viso ad vallum summum ascendit, ut expectat. Egressus appropinquantes de proelio interrogavit. Tam autem defessi erant ut ei nihil dicere vellent, sed armis abiectis ad tabernacula se conferrent.

Not sure if using autem in the last sentence is correct, but I didn't wanna write sed ..., sed because it looks ugly. Thanks in advance for any input! :)
ad summum vallum
vellent --> possent?
conferrent why subjunctive?
Thanks for your reply, sir! This might be a dumb question, but what is the difference between ad summum vallum and ad vallum summum? expectat = expectaret of course... I think I chose the subjunctive of confero because I viewed it as part of the consecutive clause. "They were so tired, that they would tell him nothing but throw away their arms and went to their tents." I mean, a result from the fact that they were tired, is that they throw away their weapons and went to their tents. Is my reasoning wrong here? Moving on, I definitely think you could use possent instead of vellent, but I don't think it makes that big of a difference, does it? "...would tell him nothing..." - to my ears at least - sounds like they didn't want to tell him anything because they were too exhausted, but they certainly could have told him something, only that they didn't really have the energy to do so. I don't think it's a significant difference anyway or am I mistaken? To me it seems like both possent or vellent would work, but I'm not completely sure. Once again, thanks for your input and I'm looking forward to your next reply. :)

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ad summum vallum --> to the top of the rampart
ad vallum summum --> to a rampart that was very tall

Regarding your reasoning, I suspect the author of the exercise would have written "they would go" instead of "they went" if he meant you to use the subjunctive.

In any case, translation is not an exact science.

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bedwere wrote:ad summum vallum --> to the top of the rampart
ad vallum summum --> to a rampart that was very tall

Regarding your reasoning, I suspect the author of the exercise would have written "they would go" instead of "they went" if he meant you to use the subjunctive.

In any case, translation is not an exact science.
Thanks for clarifying the difference between summum vallum and vallum summum! Ah, I see, you are probably correct regarding "they would go" vs. "they went". Since my native tongue isn't English, I might misinterpret these kind of things sometimes...

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Answer key to exercise 32:
Victis iam hostibus dux suos in castra reduxit, quae vallo munita erant. Legatus in castris relictus de proelio non certior factus est; qui, ut exercitum procul visum exspectaret in summum vallum ascendit. Egressus (autem) appropinquantes de proelio interrogavit. Adeo tamen erant defessi ut nihil ei dicere vellent sed armis abiectis ad tabernacula se conferrent.

So I was pretty close this time, except for the mistake with vallum summum and my blunder of writing expectat instead of expectaret... But I have to say that the answer key's solution to the passage when the lieutenant went to the top of the rampart in order to wait for the army was neater than my translation of that passage. The answer key also seems to have interpreted the last sentence in the same way that I did, i.e. that they went to their tents was also a part of the consecutive clause. The answer key suggested to have an autem in the second last sentence and used adeo tamen instead of Tam autem defessi... as I wrote. All these little words like tamen, quidem and the like confuses me a bit. I don't have a sense for when I should use what. Is there any good part in a grammar book or an article that explains this a bit more thoroughly? Any recommendations?! That would be very convenient...

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Exercise 33:
The bread being now all eaten, we were dying of hunger. But the general, callig us together, gave us the bread which he had kept hidden in his house; then, opening the gates, he and the soldiers escaped through the enemy's camp. The wounded only being left [behind] in the city, we gave ourselves up to the enemy. They soon left us, taking away much gold and silver from the city.

Pane omne iam esso moriebamur fame. Sed dux nobis convocatis panem, quem domi celaverat, dedit. Deinde portis apertis is et milites per castra hostium aufugerunt. Saucis tantum in urbe relictis, nos hostibus tradidimus. Auro multo et argento ex urbe ablato, nos brevi reliquerunt.

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I'd write nos ipsos hostibus tradidimus for clarity's sake.
As for the use of particles, you get a feeling from reading Latin texts, rather than by books of rules. I always recommend the Gospels from the Vulgate of St. Jerome as very easy texts with which (most) people are familiar in translation. Not always classical Latin, but very useful.

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bedwere wrote:I'd write nos ipsos hostibus tradidimus for clarity's sake.
As for the use of particles, you get a feeling from reading Latin texts, rather than by books of rules. I always recommend the Gospels from the Vulgate of St. Jerome as very easy texts with which (most) people are familiar in translation. Not always classical Latin, but very useful.
Nos ipsos... is indeed a bit clearer. I'll see if I can find some version of Vulgate. Do you recommend any particular edition? Lately, I've been reading a few pages of Cicero's De amicitia before I go to bed, but the Gospels is perhaps even more appropriate.

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This edition has no fluff: http://www.wilbourhall.org/pdfs/vulgate.pdf
You can find it in printed form on Lulu:
http://www.lulu.com/shop/maximus-script ... 73643.html

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bedwere wrote:Two wrong endings you'd probably find yourself, if you read it again tomorrow.
Instead of cum his, I'd write his hortationibus or something like that.
I'd write ex

I'd put nonnullos e cas.. egressos
Thanks man! I'll have a look at that edition. :)

Exercise 24
Seeing the enemy the Gauls crossed the river, and breaking down the bridge waited for Carsar's arrival. Caesar did not wish to fight immediately as his men were tired. Marching therefore into the hills he pitched a camp, then came down against the enemy when they took

Hostibus visis Galli flumen transierunt, et ponte rescisso adventum Caesaris exspectaverunt. Caesar statim pugnare nolebat, quia sui defessi erant. Profectus igitur in colles castra posuit, et quo facto contra hostes, cum egressi e castris frumenta peterent, descendit. Postea vero quam hos victos, quos cepisset, vendidit; et ponte refecto in urbem recessit.

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Sry, was a bit too drunk when I tried to do yesterday's exercise. Here's my second try! Any feedback is, as always, much appreciated. :)

Exercise 34
Seeing the enemy the Gauls crossed the river, and breaking down the bridge waited for Carsar's arrival. Caesar did not wish to fight immediately as his men were tired. Marching therefore into the hills he pitched a camp, then came down against the enemy when they had gone out of the camp and were seeking corn. Having conquered them he sold those whom he had captured, and after repairing the bridge returned to the city.

Hostibus visis Galli flumen transierunt, et ponte rescisso adventum Caesaris exspectaverunt. Caesar statim pugnare nolebat, quia sui defessi erant. Profectus igitur in colles castra posuit, et deinde contra hostes e castris frumenti petendi causa egressos descendit. Ex quibus victis captos vendidit; et quidem ponte refecto in urbem rediit.
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In vino veritas, sed non latinitas! :D

quidem stresses the phrase. It's also used to contrast two situations:
ego quidem quam bibo, tu autem vinum.
Do you really mean it?

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bedwere wrote:In vino veritas, sed non latinitas! :D

quidem stresses the phrase. It's also used to contrast two situations:
ego quidem quam bibo, tu autem vinum.
Do you really mean it?
Ita est!

I've read in Lewis & Short that quidem can mean something like 'indeed', but it might be my (lack of) understanding of English that mislead me. In general I find that words like autem, etiam, inde, deinde, vere, quidem and other common adverbs are hard to get the right feeling for... In this case it's probably best to just drop quidem.

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Exercise 35
Returning to the top of the hill the scout saw the enemy slowly advancing across the plain. Coming to the camp he told these things to the general. Immediately our camp was moved, and we set out to the other side of the river. Having broken down the bridge, so that the enemy might not follow us, we marched the whole day through the woods, and as night approached reached the city of Spoletium. The walls and gates of the city having been made by the Romans were very strong.

Explorator, regressus ad summum collem, hostes super planities tarde procedere vidit. Cum in campum pervenisset, duci haec dixit. Statim campus noster movitus est, et trans flumen profecti sumus. Ponte diruto, ne hostes nos sequerentur, omnem diem per silvas contenderunt, et nocte appropinquante ad urbem Spoletium pervenerunt. Hic commeatus colligi et ipsi nos defendere constituimus. Urbis moenia et portae perfactae ab Romanis firmissimae sunt.

Kinda in the same condition today, but I think I did better today. I'll post the answer key to exercise 24 and 25 tomorrow. Thanks for your input bedwere - you and everyone else has been very helpful to me! :) In this exercise I felt a bit unsure about super planities, whether one can use a purpose clause after an absolute ablative, if I should write ipsi nos defendere or ipsos nos defendere, and finally if it works to start the last sentence with urbis (I didn't want to write Moenia et portae urbis perfectae..., since perfectae then might be connected with urbis). Thanks in advance!

Bonam noctem!

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Answer key to exercise 34 and 35:
Hostibus conspectis Galli flumen transierunt et ponte rescisso Caesaris exspectabant. Hic statim pugnare noluit cum sui defessi essent (or suis defessis). Itaque, cum in colles contendisset, castris positis, contra hostes egressos castris et frumentum petentes descendit. Quibus victis captos vendidit, et ponte refecto ad urbem rediit.

Explorator ad summum collem regressus hostes gradatim trans campum progredientes conspexit. Quod, cum ad castra venisset, imperatori nuntiavit. Castris igitur statim motis ultra flumen profecti sumus. Ponte rescisso, ne hostes nos sequerentur, totum diem iter per silvas fecimus, et nocte appropinquante (or sub noctem) ad urbem Spoletium appropinquavimus. Hic commeatu collecto nos defendere constituimus; moenia enim et portae urbis a Romanis facta validissima erant.

I was fairly close to the answer key with exercise 34. In 35 I suspect I have two expressions that are wrong: hostes super planities tarde procedere vidit and Urbis moenia et portae perfactae ab Romanis firmissimae sunt doesn't seem as good solutions, or what do you think? I'll soon do exercise 36, I'm really gonna focus now and try to make it as good as I can.

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Exercise 36
1. In the country. At home. From Asia. From Athens. In summer. In the night. All night.
2. He sent the forces to Labienus in the camp.
3. Augustus died at Nola (when) seventy years old.
4. Cicero was consul a few years before.
5. I will go into the country next summer.
6. Ten years I stayed at your house.
7. In three days you will reach Athens.
8. I went to Syracuse in winter. The snow was two feet deep.
9. I saw my friend at Carthage three months ago.
10. The snow was deeper in the country than in the city.

1. Ruri. Domi. Ex Asia. Athenis. Aestate. Nocte. Totam noctem.
2. Copias ad Labienum in campum misit.
3. Augustus Nolae anno septuagesimo mortuus est.
4. Cicero paucis ante annis consul erat.
5. Aestate proxima in campum ibo.
6. Decem annos domi tuae mansi.
7. Tres diebus Athenas pervenibo.
8. Hieme Syracusas ivi. Nivis duo pedes alta fuit.
9. Amicum Carthagine abhinc tres menses vidit.
10. Nivis altior ruri erat, quam in urbe erat.

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Banana tree wrote:Exercise 36
1. Ruri. Domi. Ex Asia. Athenis. Aestate. Nocte. Totam noctem.
2. Copias ad Labienum in campum misit.
3. Augustus Nolae anno septuagesimo mortuus est.
4. Cicero paucis ante annis consul erat.
5. Aestate proxima in campum ibo.
6. Decem annos domi tuae mansi.
7. Tres diebus Athenas pervenibo.
8. Hieme Syracusas ivi. Nivis duo pedes alta fuit.
9. Amicum Carthagine abhinc tres menses vidit.
10. Nivis altior ruri erat, quam in urbe erat.
I think you're doing a great job.

Just a couple of things I noticed here, things you would probably notice yourself after coming back to these. :)

Camp should be castra.

Anno septuagesimo means 'in the seventieth year'. I think a construction with natus might be better to get his age across (i.e. 'when he was/at the age of seventy').

Perveniam.

Tribus instead of tres.

Snow is nix in the nominative.

Carthagine should be Carthagini.

I think you only need one erat in the last sentence.

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You're doing great. Just a few small additional notes to truks.

The age is indeed best said with natus (of course nata for women). For instance: Alexander mortuus est triginta tres annos natus.

You could use even the plural niues. The meaning would change slightly, something like 'snow bank, drift'.

Carthagini may indeed be said to be more correct, but Carthagine is quite often used, as well. Cf. e.g. Verg. Aen. 4,224: Dardaniumque ducem, Tyrias Karthagine qui nunc
Of course he would have needed that metri causa. Note, however, that Carthagine will also mean 'from Carthage'. Carthagini is unambiguous.

Of the verb ire perfect ii, isti, iit, iimus, istis, ierunt/iere is more classical than that in iu-, but I daren't say iui etc. is wrong. The stem iu- is apparently secondary. We do have some examples of iu- in Plautus, Cato, Catullus and even in Verg. Aen. 6,801: nec uero Alcides tantum telluris obiuit. (Again metri causa)

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There was an earlier thread on ii etc.: http://www.textkit.com/greek-latin-foru ... vi#p159472. Good for a laugh if nothing else.

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truks wrote:I think you're doing a great job.

Just a couple of things I noticed here, things you would probably notice yourself after coming back to these. :)

Camp should be castra.

Anno septuagesimo means 'in the seventieth year'. I think a construction with natus might be better to get his age across (i.e. 'when he was/at the age of seventy').

Perveniam.

Tribus instead of tres.

Snow is nix in the nominative.

Carthagine should be Carthagini.

I think you only need one erat in the last sentence.
Thanks! I'm doing my best, kinda busy with normal life ****. But eventually I'll get there. I agree with all your corrections, except that I've read that Carthagini is the more common form.

Thanks for your replies! It's really helping me out a lot. Wish I had more time over to hang here in the forum... Anyway, been awake for 36h, so this might not be perfect, but I think it's import to pressurize o writing in Latin...

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Exercise 36
list]In the country. At home. From Asia. From Athens. In summer. In the night. All night.
He sent the forces to Labienus in the camp.
Augustus died at Nola (when) seventy years old.
Cicero was consul a few years before.
I will go into the country next summer.
Ten years I stayed at your house.
In three days you will reach Athens.
I went to Syracuse in winter. The snow was two feet deep.
I saw my friend a[quote][/quote]t Carthage three months ago.
The snow was deeper in the country than in the city.

Ruri. Domi. Ex Asia. Athenis. Aestate. Nocte. Totam noctem.
Copias ad Labienum in campum misit.
Augustus Nolae anno septuagesimo mortuus est.
Cicero paucis ante annis consul erat.
Aestate proxima in campum ibo.
Decem annos domi tuae mansi.
Tres diebus Athenas pervenibo.
Hieme Syracusas ivi. Nivis duo pedes alta fuit.
Amicum Carthagine abhinc tres menses vidit.
Nivis altior ruri erat, quam in urbe erat./list]

Exercise 37
1. The new ship is fifty feet long.
2. At Messana. At Carthage. At Saguntum. In Sicily, From Florentia. To Pisae.
3. We shall remain at Athens or Corinth for three years.
4. On that day on which the battle was fought.
5. Nine years afterwards in the night I came home.
6. I shall come back to Carthage in nine days.
7. Do you not wish to go and see your friends in Italy?
8. Setting out from Sicily he went to Brundisium, and afterwards to Greece.
9. Will you be at home?
10. Ten days ago I came back to the city from the country.

1. Navis nova quinquaginta pedes longa erat.
2. In Messana. Carthagine. In Sagunto. In Sicilia. Florentia. Pisas.
3. Athenis aut Corinthi tribus annis manebimus.
4. Hac die, qua proelium factum est.
5. Post novem dies noctu domum pervenit.
6. Novem diebus Carthaginem reversus sum.
7. In Italiam ad amicos venire non vis?
8. Profectus e Sicilia Brundisium iit et postea in Graecam.
9. Domi aderis?
10. Abhinc decem dies rure in urbem reversus sum.

I haven't gone through the exercise as thorough that I would want to, but I ave another stupid class to attend. I'll make it better tomorrow, and post the ansser key. Please let me know, if there's something you wonder. Thanks again!

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I see that you have rejected all the proposals for improvement. Do as you wish.

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truks wrote:
Banana tree wrote:Exercise 36
1. Ruri. Domi. Ex Asia. Athenis. Aestate. Nocte. Totam noctem.
2. Copias ad Labienum in campum misit.
3. Augustus Nolae anno septuagesimo mortuus est.
4. Cicero paucis ante annis consul erat.
5. Aestate proxima in campum ibo.
6. Decem annos domi tuae mansi.
7. Tres diebus Athenas pervenibo.
8. Hieme Syracusas ivi. Nivis duo pedes alta fuit.
9. Amicum Carthagine abhinc tres menses vidit.
10. Nivis altior ruri erat, quam in urbe erat.
I think you're doing a great job.

Just a couple of things I noticed here, things you would probably notice yourself after coming back to these. :)

Camp should be castra.

Anno septuagesimo means 'in the seventieth year'. I think a construction with natus might be better to get his age across (i.e. 'when he was/at the age of seventy').

Perveniam.

Tribus instead of tres.

Snow is nix in the nominative.

Carthagine should be Carthagini.

I think you only need one erat in the last sentence.
Thanks for your reply! The book gives an example before this exercise of how you're supposed to express time, place and space. One example for "time when" is "Tricesimo anno mortuus est. He died in the 30th year." I think that was why I wrote no. 3 the way I did. I see now that they also gives the example Undeviginti annos natus. - Nineteen years old." I think these examples confused me, but I'll go with "30 years old he died" instead of "in the 30th year he died", because I guess 30th year expressed with an ablative could mean the 30th year of earth or something like that? The other mistakes were just me being stupid, I know better than that! Thanks for pointing them out anyway! And yeah, it also said in the book that "to express place where use the Locative of towns, small islands, domus, rus, humus; e.g. Romae, Athenis, Cortinthi, Rhodi, humi." They didn't write anything about Carthago, and when I looked up the locative in my grammar book it said "Carthagini in Carthage (often replaced by Carthagine), hence I figured it was ok to write Carthagine... I also agree about erat in the last sentence.
Timothée wrote:You're doing great. Just a few small additional notes to truks.

The age is indeed best said with natus (of course nata for women). For instance: Alexander mortuus est triginta tres annos natus.

You could use even the plural niues. The meaning would change slightly, something like 'snow bank, drift'.

Carthagini may indeed be said to be more correct, but Carthagine is quite often used, as well. Cf. e.g. Verg. Aen. 4,224: Dardaniumque ducem, Tyrias Karthagine qui nunc
Of course he would have needed that metri causa. Note, however, that Carthagine will also mean 'from Carthage'. Carthagini is unambiguous.

Of the verb ire perfect ii, isti, iit, iimus, istis, ierunt/iere is more classical than that in iu-, but I daren't say iui etc. is wrong. The stem iu- is apparently secondary. We do have some examples of iu- in Plautus, Cato, Catullus and even in Verg. Aen. 6,801: nec uero Alcides tantum telluris obiuit. (Again metri causa)
Thank you for showing an example of how I should have expressed a sentence a long the lines of "He died at x years old." Thanks for clarifying the perfect of ire, I didn't know which one was more correct. I figured both was fine.
Timothée wrote:I see that you have rejected all the proposals for improvement. Do as you wish.
I don't understand what you mean? Have I been unpleasant or something? Is there something I've missed - am I dumb? In my previous post I accidentally copied exercise 36 again. I keep all the exercises in the same document, and then I have another document where I put the exercises with your corrections. I don't ignore what you're writing, and I truly am grateful for the fact that so many people have taken their time and helped me... This is something I just do in the evenings in my spare time, when I'm usually quite tired. I'm sorry if I'm a bit slow in understanding your comments or making too many errors. :cry:
Banana tree wrote: Exercise 37
1. Navis nova quinquaginta pedes longa erat.
2. In Messana. Carthagine. In Sagunto. In Sicilia. Florentia. Pisas.
3. Athenis aut Corinthi tribus annis manebimus.
4. Hac die, qua proelium factum est.
5. Post novem dies noctu domum pervenit.
6. Novem diebus Carthaginem reversus sum.
7. In Italiam ad amicos venire non vis?
8. Profectus e Sicilia Brundisium iit et postea in Graecam.
9. Domi aderis?
10. Abhinc decem dies rure in urbem reversus sum.
Discovered these blunders just now:
1. erat -> est
2. In Messana -> Messanae; In Sagunto -> Sagunti
5. post novem dies -> post novem annos

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Your message previous to my last message in this thread contained again the Exercise 36, where you heeded none of the proposed changes, improvements or variants. I do realise there can be many correct alternatives, but I found disregarding everything disrespectful.

If that, as you now suggest, were actually only a mistake and misunderstanding, it's alright and you needn't worry about that.

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Timothée wrote:Your message previous to my last message in this thread contained again the Exercise 36, where you heeded none of the proposed changes, improvements or variants. I do realise there can be many correct alternatives, but I found disregarding everything disrespectful.

If that, as you now suggest, were actually only a mistake and misunderstanding, it's alright and you needn't worry about that.
Of course I don't ignore the feedback I get, man! I mean, I want to develop my written Latin. Otherwise, I wouldn't be doing this... I study creative writing, have a job and taking a course in NT Greek. My active skills in Latin used be better before, but now I'm trying my best to brush it up again, as well as reading some Cicero or The Vulgate whenever I get some time over.

As I said, I have two documents: one document where I have my own solutions, written before I've looked in the answer key or before you have given me any input; then I have a second document in which I try to correct my previous mistakes. I don't post the corrected versions, because I don't really see a reason for it, since either you or the answer key has at that point giving me the solution. It was my intention to only copy Exercise 37 from the document with my own, (often times unsuccessful) solutions, but I accidentally copied 36 and 37 at the same time.

I hope you guys understand what I'm trying to explain and that I didn't offend anyone! Will probably not be able to do any exercises until Friday or Saturday - too much annoying commitments I have to finish first! Bonam noctem and peace, dudes and ladies!

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