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Postby Apollimagine » Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:23 pm

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Postby Bert » Wed Apr 16, 2008 1:10 am

I can't make a comment on the correctness but it was fun anyways.
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Postby GreekGeek2 » Thu May 08, 2008 2:20 pm

I like the story, it's a bit short and I think I don't get the whole idea. I think you did a pretty good job. Perfect grammar, so that's worth a bunch of compliments. Made some mistakes with the accents and final 'n's, but who cares :D
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