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Little Nemo 1905-00-00

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Little Nemo 1905-00-00

Postby bedwere » Mon Jun 12, 2017 12:44 am

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We’ll get him
Bring Nemo to Slumberland sure. King Morpheus.
Stay right where you are and we’ll hustle you into Slumberland quicker than a wink


Adducemus eum.
Tute advehite Neminem in Dormitoriam. Morpheus Rex.
Mane quidem ubi es, nos autem in ictu oculi propellemus te in Dormitoriam.

Ἄξομεν αὐτόν.
Ἀκινδύνως προσκομίσατε Οὔτινα εἰς Κοιμητηρίαν. Μορφεὺς Βασιλεύς.
Μεῖνον μὲν ὅπου εἶ, ἡμεῖς δὲ ἐν ῥιπῇ ὀφθαλμοῦ ὠθήσομέν σε εἰς Κοιμητηρίαν.

1 Nemo was a very sound sleeper but not so sound as not to hear the rustling of the portieres, heavy breathing and a strange subdued snickering in his very room.

Easy now but hurry! We haven’t much time.


Nemo solebat gravem somnum dormire neque autem talem ut non audiret strepitum velorum et anhelantium et mire subridentium in sui ipsius cubiculo.
Festinate lente! Non est nobis multum tempus.

Ὁ μὲν Οὖτις εἰωθὼς ἦν βαρὺν κοιμᾶσθαι οὐδὲ τοιοῦτον ὥστε μὴ ἀκοῦσαι τὸν ψόφον τῶν καταπετασμένων καὶ τῶν ἀσθμαινόντων καὶ τῶν θαυμασίως ὑπογελώντων ἐν τῷ ἑαυτοῦ δωματίῳ.
Σπεύδετε βραδέως. Οὐκ ἔστιν ἡμῖν πολὺς χρόνος.

That’s it, be easy but hurry!

2. Opening his eyes, he saw six of the busiest star imps carrying in all manner of odd looking golden objects. He remained calm although inwardly he was burn-


Atque ideo, festinate lente!
2. Cum oculos aperuisset, vidit sex occupatissimorum stellatorum dæmoniorum qui insolitarum omne genus aurearum rerum inferebant. Tranquillus autem mansit etsi

Καὶ μάλα, σπεύδετε βραδέως.
2. Ἀνοίξας δὲ τοὺς ὀφθαλμούς, εἶδεν ἓξ τῶν ἀσχολωτάτων ἠστερισμένων δαιμονίων εἰσφέροντα πᾶν γένος ἀήθων χρυσῶν σκευῶν. Ἄκυμος δ' ἔμεινε καίπερ

Now we’ll wheel you outside to the ponies

3 -ing up with curiosity. He soon learned, however what it all meant. The star imps were transforming his bed into a grand golden chariot in which they proposed to-



Nunc rotis efferemus te ad equuleos.

expectatione exardescebat. Mox tamen cognovit quid hæc significarent. Nam stellata dæmonia commutabant lectum ejus in quoddam magnum currum aureum in quo ferrent eum in Dormitoriam.


Νῦν τροχοῖς ἐξοίσομέν σε πρὸς τὰ ἱππάρια.

προσδοκίᾳ ἐγκαιόμενος. Αὐτίκα μέντοι ἔγνω τί ταῦτα σημαίνοι. Τὰ γὰρ ἠστερισμένα δαιμόνια μετεποίουν τὴν κοίτην αὐτοῦ εἰς μέγα χρυσοῦν ἅρμα τι ἵνα ἐφ' ᾧ φέροιεν αὐτὸν εἰς τὴν Κοιμητηρίαν.

Wait second!
Take your time but hustle! We must hurry up, you know?


Paulisper manete.
Urgens opus sume tempus. Festinandum vero est.

Μείνατε ὀλίγον χρόνον.
Ὠθῶν τὸ πρᾶγμα λαβοῦ χρόνον. Δεῖ δὴ σπεύδειν.

4 convey him to Slumberland. It took the imps but a few minutes to adjust the different parts and they rolled it out of the room to where two prancing and bejewelled ponies awaited to complete the most beautiful equipage Nemo had ever seen.

Postquam dæmonia varias aptando partes modo paulisper occupata essent, e cubicolo eum emoverunt quo duo equulei exsilientes et gemmati expectabant ut pulcherrimus, quem Nemo umquam viderat, apparatus compleretur.

Ἐπειδὴ τὰ δαιμόνια ἁρμόσαντα τὰ ποικίλα μέρη ὅσον ὀλίγον χρόνον ἠσχολήσαντο, ἐκ τοῦ δωματίου αὐτὴν ἀπήγαγον ὅποι δύο ἱππάρια ἀναπηδῶντα καὶ λιθοκόλλητα ὄντα ἀνεμένοντο ὥστε τὸ κάλλιστον, οἷον πώποτε ὁ Οὖτις εἶδεν, παρασκεύασμα ἀναπληρωθῆναι.

Aw!!! What’s up now, shorty?

Heu! Nunc autem quid est, homuncio?

Φεῦ. Τί τὸ πρᾶγμα τουτί, ἀνθρώπιον;




The dawn will be here soon.

Cito fiet dies.

Ταχὺ ἡμέρα γενήσεται.

He can’t get his gloves on! Shucks!


Non potest induere digitabula! Papæ!

Οὐ δύναται ἐνδῦσαι τὰς χειρίδας. Πόποι.

5 When all was in readiness and the funny little coachman ascended to the box a scandalous bit of mismanagement occurred. G It seems his new driving gloves didn’t fit. He puffed and fumed for four hours until Nemo and the imps became shockingly

Cum omnia parata essent et ridiculus parvusque auriga in sellam ascendisset, turpis lapsus factus est. Nova enim ad gubernandum digitalia non videbantur ei convenire. Qui autem quattuor horas anhelans furuit donec Nemo et dæmonia perirati facti sunt.

Ἐπεὶ πάντα ἕτοιμα ἦν καὶ ὁ γέλοιος καὶ μικρὸς ἡνίοχος εἰς τὸν δίφρον ἀνέβη, αἰσχρὸν ἁμάρτημά τι ἐγένετο. Αἱ μὲν γὰρ κυβερνητικαὶ χειρίδες οὐκ ἐδόκουν ἁρμόζειν αὐτῷ. Ὁ δὲ τέσσαρας ὥρας ἀσθμαίνων ἐμάνη ἕως ὁ Οὖτις καὶ τὰ δαιμόνια διωργίσθησαν.

Aw! Oh please don’t!
Oh! Oh! Oh! We are lost. Oh, oh.
Mister Dawn! How can you be so cruel?
Please! Oh, please let us go to Slumberland!
Hold! Just a few minutes!
Be off! Vamoose! Fade away! You must disappear! The sun is coming! I can’t hold it back. Dissolve! Melt! Vanish!


Eheu, ne facias, rogamus te!
Heu, heu, heu! Perimus. Heu, heu.
O domine matutine, qui enim tam crudelis es?
Οbsecramus te, sine nos in Dormitoriam ire!
Retine! Tantum parumper!
Abite. Discedite. Evanescite. Proficiscendum vobis. Nam Sol venit quem neque possum retinere. Dissolvimini. Liquefacimini. Latemini.

Αἴ, μὴ ποιήσῃς, δεόμεθά σου.
Οἴ, οἴ, οἴ, ἀπολώλαμεν. Οἴ, οἴ.
Ὦ δέσποτα ἑῷε, πῶς γὰρ οὕτως ὠμὸς εἶ;
Ἀντιβολοῦμέν σε, ἔασον ἡμᾶς εἰς Κοιμητηρίαν ἰέναι.
Κατέσχε. Μόνον ὀλίγον χρόνον.
Ἄπιτε. Ἀπέλθετε. Ἀφανίσθητε. Οἰχητέον ὑμῖν. Ὁ γὰρ ἥλιος ἔρχεται οὐδὲ δύναμαι αὐτὸν κατέχειν. Ἀναλύθητε. Τάκητε. Ἀφανεῖς γένεσθε.


6 angry. Finally, after great stretching, the gloves were adjusted, but too late for even a start for Slumberland, as the advance guard of dawn appeared announcing the coming of the morning sun and day.


Postremo, digitabula, diu extensa, aptata sunt, serius autem quam in Dormitoriam modo proficiscerentur, quoniam antecursores matutini apparuerunt qui nuntiarent Solem oriri ac diem.

Τὰ μὲν τελευταῖα, αἱ χειρίδες, πολὺν χρόνον ἐκταθεῖσαι, ἡρμόσθησαν, ὀψιαίτερον δ’ ἢ εἰς Κοιμητηρίαν μόνον ἐπορεύοντο, ὅτι τοι οἱ ἑῷοι προφύλακες ὤφθησαν ὡς ἀγγελῶντες τὸν Ἥλιον ἀνατέλλειν τήν τε ἡμέραν.

While it was just what the imps expected of their long delay, yet they made pathetic appeals for a stay of time. Nemo will never forget how frantically they
7 begged for just enough night to succeed in taking him to Slumberland.


Quod etsi vero ob longam dilationem expectabant, tamen dæmonia flebiliter obsecrabant ut manerent dum parumper. Nemo autem nunquam obliviscetur quomodo furiose postulaverint tantum sat noctis ut feliciter ducerent eum in Dormitoriam.

Καίπερ τοῦτο διὰ τὴν μακρὰν ἀναβολὴν προσδοκῶντα, ὅμως τὰ δαιμόνια θρηνοῦντα παρεκάλουν ἵνα περιμένοιεν χρόνον τινά. Ὁ δὲ Οὖτις οὔποτε λήσεται πῶς μανικῶς ᾐτοῦντο μόνον ἱκανόν τι τῆς νυκτὸς ὥστε εὐτυχῶς ἄγειν αὐτὸν εἰς τὴν Κοιμητηρίαν.


At the time he didn’t understand it all, but later, when the sun appeared and he saw all of this gorgeousness melt away before his eyes, he broke into tears.


Tunc quidem non omnia hæc intellexit, postea autem, sole orto, cum videret cuncta hæc speciosa in conspectu suo tabescentia, effundit lacrimas.

Τότε μὲν οὐ πάντα ταῦτα συνῆκεν, ἔπειτα δέ, τοῦ ἡλίου ἀνατέλλοντος, ὁρῶν ἅπαντα ταῦτα τὰ εὐπρεπῆ ἐνώπιον αὐτοῦ φθίνοντα, ἀφῆκε δάκρυα.

He had fully believed that he was to go to Slumberland straightway, in royal style, and meet the pretty princess, but he believed otherwise when

8 he saw the sun, saw it enter his room until it blinded his eyes and he awoke feeling miserable.


Sibi enim persuasus erat se in Dormitoriam, similem regi, confestim iturum et pulchræ regis filiæ occursurum, aliter autem opinatus est cum vidisset solem in cubiculum suum ingredientem, donec hic occæcavit oculos ejus, ipse autem excitatus est
animo destitutus.

Ὁ μὲν γὰρ ἐπεποίθει εἰς τὴν Κοιμητηρίαν ἐοικὼς βασιλεῖ εὐθὺς ἰέναι καὶ τῇ καλῇ τοῦ βασιλέως θυγατρὶ ἀπαντήσειν, ἄλλως δ' ᾠήθη ἰδὼν τὸν ἥλιον, τὸν εἰς τὸ δωμάτιον αὐτοῦ εἰσιόντα, ἕως οὗτος μὲν ἠμαύρωσε τοὺς ὀφθαλμοὺς αὐτοῦ, αὐτὸς δ' ἐγέρθη ἀθυμῶν.


Pshaw
Come! Nemo: your breakfast is awaiting you. Come! Come! Nemo get up! It’s time for Sunday school.


Vah.
Veni, Nemo: jentaculum te manet. Ηuc, huc! Surge, Nemo! Hora doctrinæ Christianæ est.

Φεῦ.
Ἐλθέ, Οὖτις· τὸ ἀκράτισμα μένει τε. Δεῦρο, δεῦρο. ἀνάστηθι, Οὖτις. Ὥρα τῆς Χριστιανικῆς διδασκαλίας ἐστίν.
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Re: Little Nemo 1905-00-00

Postby daivid » Sun Jun 25, 2017 10:32 am

Can I take it that as no one has found fault with Bedwere's translation, it is without fault.

If any of our resident experts have read it through and found nothing to simply post that I feel sure would be welcome to Bedwere.
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Re: Little Nemo 1905-00-00

Postby bedwere » Mon Aug 07, 2017 11:23 pm

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Re: Little Nemo 1905-00-00

Postby daivid » Tue Aug 08, 2017 2:54 pm

I found the small letters a little difficult to read so I did a version which was twice the size. Hopefully I put the text in the right place:

http://kart-hadasht.co.uk/anc/greeklang ... -gimp.jpeg

I added in the texts using GIMP so I include a link to the GIMP file:

http://kart-hadasht.co.uk/anc/greeklang ... 0-lglg.xcf
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