ἀλλ’ ἐδαφοι γ’ ἐφυγον γης, πιπτει δ’ οὐρανος. ἠδη
μισθοφορειτ’ αἰνως. ἠλθετε και θανετε.
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a variation on
Epitaph to an Army of Mercenaries
A E Housman
... not too sure about ending the pentameter with a short, but I think Zenodotos does in his 'A Statue of Love' (among others).
Paul McK
Housman Epitaph Part 1
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Thank you for your considered reply, ~D.
I can tinker a wee bit, making both verbs in line 1 imperfects (albeit unaugmented) and so shift the phrase ending to the normal caesura. I'm not a competent enough dialectician to be comfortable with unaugmented imps!
γης ἐδαφοι φευγον και πιπτεν δ’ οὐρανος. ἠδη ... κτλ
I can tinker a wee bit, making both verbs in line 1 imperfects (albeit unaugmented) and so shift the phrase ending to the normal caesura. I'm not a competent enough dialectician to be comfortable with unaugmented imps!
γης ἐδαφοι φευγον και πιπτεν δ’ οὐρανος. ἠδη ... κτλ