Great job on the translation. I'm going to point out a couple small errors:
"which name had taken its name..." should read "which had taken its name..."
"Juno, whose bad character Juno had never..." should read "Juno, who had never been able to bear Juppiter's bad character..."
"...perceived this deed and held the memory." (look at the case for memory, it is ablative, so it should read "held [it] in memory," you're supposed to assume that "in" is there)
Keep it up!